Some think that printed books are not necessary in the digital era, because all writing can be stored electronically. Other think printed books still play an important role. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
As we are dwelling under a state-of-the-art era, it has been really common for the majority of individuals to do everything on the internet. However, the topic of whether electronic books can replace traditional books or not has still remained polarized. In this essay, I will delineate both views and give my own opinion.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that printed books are still indispensable. Firstly, they can prevent readers from suffering from eye-related problems. With people who are sensitive to blue waves from electronic screens, it will be tremendously detrimental for their health if they spend long hours reading books on the Internet. Secondly, some individuals such as bookworm find enthusiasm in collecting books or giving books as a present. Yet those on screen cannot satisfy their demand.
On the other hand, I side with the opinion that electronic books can steadily replace traditional writings because of their time and cost saving. Firstly, they do not require an intensive manufacturing process and paper to print books like traditional ones. Due to that, citizens can publish their books in a short time. Moreover, this way also acts as a catalyst for the preservation of environment because people consume less materials like paper. Secondly, readers do not have to pay money for buying books. In lieu of that, they can read writings on the Internet with no fees.
In conclusion, printed books are still important in some ways. However, I totally agree with the view that they should make way for electronic writings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 424, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun materials is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...n of environment because people consume less materials like paper. Secondly, readers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15748031496 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83935523031 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590551181102 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1740583844 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.875 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308114893346 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104527310819 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854819214764 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196758847797 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155847909312 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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