Some university students want to learn other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some universities allow their students to learn anything they like at the same time as their studies. According to some this issue can have a bad effect on their lessons and they should pay attention to their studies, some else believes this is a good plan to both study and learn or work at the same time. In my opinion, it is very good to learn a different subject or career but you have to know your lesson is so important and shouldn’t affect other things.
Therefore, the education systems can set some rules for their students which either don’t allow work overtime or more than 48 hours in a week. This is a good rule for ph. D student because they have to notice on their study. learning a new subject or new career can help you in your future life. Not only can you improve your resume and your skills but also this give you more opportunities to work. For example, a person who studies mechanics and knows about technical things has more chances of hiring. Hence, the student should work hard to learn these skills and you have to devote a lot of hours to practicing and revising which can hurt your courses. In addition, it makes you a weak body person because don’t have enough time to relax.
On the other hand, it is important to pay attention to your courses because of your breakthroughing. Sometimes your parents allocate lots of money for your tuition and fees to study at a good university and by learning useful subjects waste all of them. Although knowing an extra subject is very useful such as programming your family wants to see you in a good position in society. They want to you become a gorgeous and important person for your country. Thus, by mere studying university courses don’t have technical skills or don’t know extra field and creer that can reduce your chance to hire in a company.
In conclusion, sometimes it is so good to learn about different subjects and fields so that don’t have a negative effect on your main study.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beliefs' (noun) instead of believes (verb)?
Suggestion: beliefs
...y attention to their studies, some else believes this is a good plan to both study and l...
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Line 2, column 225, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Learning
...use they have to notice on their study. learning a new subject or new career can help yo...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59322033898 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41640207964 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480225988701 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8632666268 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6470588235 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353959151683 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115646035434 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567305736779 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210794769478 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07616922407 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.