Nowadays the development of technology make the travelling abroad has become easier and cheaper. So many people love to travel to abroad with the most famous tourist destinations.
Undoubtedly that there are some impacts to the environment, national culture and local people, but they can be avoided and reduced.
First of all we must realize that tourism is an vital element in raising the economic level of the country as well as providing people with foreign languages and other cultures
In addition to publish the country's culture to others through tourists.
For example: The result of tourism There are many career opportunities for the local people such as work in tourism guidance will open offices to provide tourism services.
Secondly, tourism contribute to develop the country's infrastructure such as building hotels , resorts and building roads to tourist destinations.
On the other hand, there are some influence that may affect the environment and the local population as well as the community culture as it prices of goods, materials and housing rises significantly
Moreover , maybe the environment is vulnerable to environmental pollution due to the huge number of tourists and the resulting consumption of materials and throwing in the streets , beaches and public places.
However, this can be reduced
For example, put the instructions for tourist guides in public places as well as to educate tourists on the importance of preserving the environment.
In conclusion , the tourism is considered to be an important factor in raising the local economy, despite its negative impacts, which can be overcome and reduced.
written by Bander Dabwan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45977011494 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92067670902 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570881226054 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.025446762 49.4020404114 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.5 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.8 7.06120827912 238% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280497490772 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097834721442 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581935919429 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092058674018 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517152215249 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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