Space exploration costs taxpayers an exorbitant amount of money each year. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
There is no shortage of human suffering on Earth. Issues such as extreme poverty, hunger, wildfires, and many more have plagued humanity. In such times, the government levies taxes on the hardworking citizen to fuel its ambitious space program.
Extraneous spending on unnecessary space exploration has been criticised widely by the lay man. A voyage to mars costs billions of dollars which could be ostensibly used to solve Earthly problems. If the mission fails, every penny put into it becomes worthless. These drawbacks make the taxpayer question the need for such explorations as the money is drawn form the common man’s pocket. No direct advantage of the space program is realised upon the public which works day and night to earn these wages.
Despite of these drawbacks, space programs are crucial for human development. Only 2% of the annual budget is allotted for space explorations. Space exploration has fuelled human imagination and forced man to search the depths of his mind for answers. The artificial earth satellite circling the globe transmits valuable data back to Earth from high altitudes. This data is used to predict natural disasters and calamities. Also, the GPS systems uses 3 satellites to pinpoint a location on Earth, enabling us to reach to our loved ones without getting lost. Pollution levels can be monitored efficiently using satellites. A deeper appreciation for Earth and life is developed through these voyages.
The taxpayer is unaware of how profoundly space impacts life on earth. It acts a catalyst for technological developments and spurs men to expend their best efforts to increase human potential. Therefore, investing in science, is investing in a better future for humanity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32608695652 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8282669964 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673913043478 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6311291007 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.3684210526 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5263157895 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.68421052632 7.06120827912 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122878356659 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356579144171 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383271340961 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069396569005 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449213620356 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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