In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words.
Despit the advances made in farming, there are many concerns connected with it. that is partly because many people around the world yet were found hungry. Also, it should be noted that there are many responses for this issue, but none of them boil down to a final solution.
A recent studies reveal done by plenty of researchers reveal that corruption between governers is the main reason for this problems. It contributes to hide many food sources and mislead the people by wrong information. Another thing is worthy of mentioning is climate changes and its diversity around the world, where in some part it causes drought. Apart from this, the gap between rich and poor people is widen. Rich people engross in quisine and money when poor people have not sufficent foods. Industrialization can impact agriculture and degrade soil.
To bridge the gap between poor and rich people, government can increase the tax of rich and eliminate it for poor people. Wit that in mind, they can allocate some money to decrease unemployment rate which is one of the main cause of poverty. Plus, government must declare financial documents clearly to the ordinary people to avoid any corruption. Climate changes is global issue which requires nation assistance to decrease its effects. Experts reason lack of knowledge and industrialization can foster it. so, by informing people through media such as television, magazines and leaflets, we can slower its development.
To wrap it up, industrialization, government corruption, climate changes and the gap between poor and rich people are the major cause of the mentioned issue. Informing people about both climate changes and financial affairs by government can help solving this matter. Along with this, government must take appropriate action toward poverty and industrialization.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'study'?
Suggestion: study
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...etween governers is the main reason for this problems. It contributes to hide many f...
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to solve' or 'solve'.
Suggestion: to solve; solve
...inancial affairs by government can help solving this matter. Along with this, governmen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, another thing, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28865979381 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87221502659 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580756013746 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2789522876 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.5 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72222222222 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200479147985 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065157764679 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040981540636 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133975215204 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518680234381 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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