Despite the development of the economy generally and agriculture particularly, numerous people around the world are still suffering from food shortages.
The two main causes of food shortages are the modernize in agriculture and victual product’s tax increased. When humans recognized the advantages and flexibility of technology, they started replacing labor forces with automated machines. Applying machine in agriculture is not only save money to pay for farmers and give high accuracy proportion but also can boost productivity. For instance, a farmer can cut 10 square meters of glasses but a cutting machine can cut 100 square meters. Consequently, it causes the unemployment rate to rise rapidly and financial lacking to purchase food. Also, with the high quality of victual products, their tax becomes higher and higher. For example, in view years ago people could pay 100000 dongs per market time but now this number has been double or even triple, rice and meat become luxury with some houses. Thus, agricultural advances have some certain influences on people’s go hungry issue.
Some possible solutions to this problem are expanding the handicraft market and reducing food tax and cost. By extending the handicraft market where meticulousness and flexibility can not be created by machines required, lots of employment will be created. This way, it can provide enough for unemployeds and help them fill their empty stomach. Moreover, the government should decrease victual products’ tax and cost appropriately, make conditions for every person can buy food and offer nutritions.
To conclude, the advances made in agriculture have some negative impact on the living quality of some certain people. However, we in general and the government, in particular, can significantly lessen the figure of food shortages person by expanding handicraft market and declining victual products’ tax and cost.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 43, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, in general, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50508474576 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93292633392 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623728813559 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7084087048 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.266666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199616208939 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642021722506 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054947594374 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122545274128 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029419506631 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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