In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?
technology advancement flourish each and every filed with his pros also advent of technology improve aguricultur filed but still there are many people around the globe that are hungry reasons for that are discussed in the upcoming paragraphs with some solutions.
there are a plethora of reasons behind this obstacle and predominant one is higher cost of crops and tools. The price of Corp is very high average people can not afford and also agriculture tools are very expensive that is why everyone can not buy agriculture equipment for farming that ultimately leads to less production of crops while the population is increasing by passing each day that leads to hunger.For example,a survey conducted reveals that 35 percent people are hungry due to less production of crops. Moreover,due to technology advancement there are many pesticides and insecticide that good for to kill insects and pests but also these inhibit production of grain and wheat that also one cause of hunger.
Shifting towards solutions,there are many solutions and first is government should provide substitutes on aguricultur gadgets and also provides crops on resanabel price . Further,people should avoid use of harmful chemicals and they can use home made compose instead of chemicals. In addition to this,people should not waste food because there are many people who waste large portion of food on marriages they can distribute that eatable stuff to needy people.
To recapitulate, food is one of basic need of life it is important that every individual have at least eat one meal in a day for that government encourage people to grow more crops with less expenditure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, still, while, at least, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22471910112 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83061924747 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561797752809 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.4251607491 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.375 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.375 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163695355854 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685829362912 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368309160369 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890395797984 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425506081559 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.