in spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
why is this the case?
what can be done about this problem?
Nowadays, agriculture is advanced to its highest levels. On the contrary, a considerable population around the globe are suffering from famine. This probably is an aftermath of chronic conflicts and wars. To tackle the widespread hunger some preventing measures could be taken, among which improving public knowledge and awareness have the biggest impact on avoiding strife and hence famine.
As it is witnessed it is not the lack of natural resources or drought-stricken countries that struggle with hunger but the ones that hosting a chronic war. The fights simply taking away any chances of executing comprehensive agricultural plans, preventing advancements from taking place in their full capacity which in turn leads to an inefficient and traditional form of cultivation. Somalia and Cambodia are both have victims of famine on the scale of millions, the former with the biggest livestock capabilities in the area and the latter corner to corner covered with fertile lands, are also the ones that exposed to decades-long conflicts.
It is true that the best recipe to avoid a war is people’s high levels of education, which makes them immune to making sworn enemies out of small differences. By improving the educational system and making it available for all, people will learn how to solve their problems with less friction and through diplomacy, in such a way agricultural advancements will find a way to come into effect and eradicating famine. This scenario works in both ways meaning: as most of the wars happen over water and food resources by improving public knowledge about new advancements in agriculture they learn knacks of cultivating adequate food to avoid conflicts which have a positive feedback on minimizing hunger.
In conclusion, it is not the lack of natural resources that lead to famine but the conflicts and wars keeping agricultural advancements at the door. Probably one of the best ways to prevent strife is by raising public educational levels introducing new ways of interacting with each other to avoid frictions and teaching advanced methods of cultivation to eradicate famine.
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- in spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.why is this the case?what can be done about this problem? 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, in conclusion, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31952662722 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99409453421 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55325443787 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.069412324 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.833333333 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1666666667 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0893188152295 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351506847677 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261272929397 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0552290689584 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332374899451 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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