Nowadays, a great number of people around the world is facing hunger although improvements have been made in agriculture. It is crucial to tackle this issue and sort out the causes since the more the citizens are starving, the greater the negative impacts will be on the country's productivity.
Among the leading causes of famine, poverty plays as an important causative factor. In fact, poverty and hunger exist in a vicious cycle. The poor cannot afford to buy nutritious food for themselves as well as for their families. On the flip side, they cannot work longer hours since they are undernourished. Another reason might be due to population growth especially in the third world. The people in the developing world are not well-educated and have deficient knowledge about birth control methods. Consequently, the birth rate among the poor social class cannot be controlled, leading them to be in hunger-poverty chain. Besides, war and conflicts act as one of the possible causes of hunger world. The civil wars transform the cultivated land into battle field, disturbing the local farmers and agricultural sector. Meanwhile, importing goods will not be possible due to political instability.
Famine should be regarded as an international concern and all the governments, organizations and individuals should work together to overcome this problem. One sensible solution is to downsize poverty by provision of financial and technical help by the developed world. Organizations like United Nations should support the areas where famine has stricken. Furthermore, food donations would also deter the increasing number of hunger population. It is found that food wasted from the developed countries could feed the hunger world, and therefore, they should be encouraged to donate food instead of allowing them to rot. Not only it will prevent starvation but also it can improve the goodwill between the nations. Last but not least, maternal education plays a crucial role in preventing population growth which is a cause of famine. They should be educated about birth control and use of contraceptive methods. The government can also implement laws to limit birth rate by enforcing their citizens to bear one child per household, take China for instance.
In conclusion, since people become aware of food shortage in many countries, everyone and every organization should take part in reduction of this problem through maternal literacy, food donations and financial support, and finally, imposing laws to control the overgrowth of population. As soon as these solutions can be effectively brought about, I believe a significant reduction in the number of people going hungry will be seen.
- Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 56
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.Why is this the case?What can be done about this problem? 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, finally, furthermore, if, so, therefore, third, well, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2276.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 425.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35529411765 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89942698073 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557647058824 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5929429247 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9565217391 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4782608696 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5652173913 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195930463066 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492550522327 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507076347393 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136052703245 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475262158893 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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