Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that talking with someone is stronger than communicating by writing in a paper.
This essay disagrees with this statement and will first claim that written statements are more durable than oral ones, secondly, it will explain that things that are written are clearer to understand.
To begin with, written expressions cannot be modified and keep the same status as the time pass by. That is to say that written things can be read in different moments. As a consequence, written expressions can be interpreted by anyone who access that document. In contrast, something that is spoken is heard only once and this result in less number of listeners. For example, a scientific article is aim to be read by many people, not as well as an oral conference at a meetting, where only the present people are fortunates to hear the discourse.
On the other hand, spoken language can be misunderstood. This is because gestures often change the meaning of what someone is trying to express. For instance, is really common for a driver who is lost and need an advise, to misinterpretate the oral instructions of the advisor, due to the fact that it might misunderstand the body gestures of the latter to indicate the route. Hence, this type of communications would be more clear if they are explained and written in a piece of paper.
To conclude, although oral comunication is paramount for living in this planet, I disagree that is more stronger than writing owing to the fact that written things lead to a clearer understanding and also stay longer in time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 211, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ommon for a driver who is lost and need an advise, to misinterpretate the oral instructio...
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Line 6, column 214, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'advice' (a noun)?
Suggestion: advice
...on for a driver who is lost and need an advise, to misinterpretate the oral instructio...
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Line 8, column 100, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
...ving in this planet, I disagree that is more stronger than writing owing to the fact that wri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in contrast, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86567164179 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84415507465 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544776119403 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0837378627 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191683596218 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699617181369 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556941944963 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11584356566 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312131156699 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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