Sport is becoming a business with high income for professionals and more companies have involved in financial investment and in other ways. Do you think it is a positive or negative development for sports?
Sport is a lucrative industry and sporting personalities can have desirable income. It is indisputable that many corporations provide financial aid and other forms of support. From my perspective, this could have both benefits and drawbacks in equal measures.
There are various reasons why investing in sport has merits. First of all, sponsors would help athletes with not only a professional training process that warrants success but also modern tools and equipment to support the exercise effectively. The better the quality of the training sessions, the more athletes' morale, and motivation are enhanced, which helps them to achieve brilliant results and medals in competitions. Furthermore, this is beneficial for sponsors as the athletes' victories they have sponsored are also an opportunity for them to promote their brand names. Another justification is that sports players deserve a higher monthly stipend. Professional sports leagues are extremely competitive, moreover, following a sports career encounters such risky feat that athletes can easily get injured and their span is very short.
Sport translates into economic businesses, however, could bring a number of demerits. The main problem is the commercialization of sports. Sponsered sports teams and individuals would be put under the pressure of attaining a prize. In order to win at all cost, cheating is one possible case which leads to the loss of sports value. It should also be noted that popular sports tend to attract more investors than less popular ones. While this is beneficial for investors, it would lead to unfair competition between different sports because of inequality.
It is evident that financial assistance and other supporting factors will have both upsides and downsides impacts on sport.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'athletes'' or 'athlete's'?
Suggestion: athletes'; athlete's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51636363636 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93229383034 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654545454545 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3831185388 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8125 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268311276983 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805799715111 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464126533317 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158925293197 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0108300403354 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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