The spread of multinational companies and resulting increase of globalization produces positive effects for everyone. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent decades, globalization has advanced at a high speed and affected people’s life in all aspects, including goods using on daily basis. While it is true that this tendency can be beneficial for individuals to some extent, I would argue that it has more drawbacks.
To begin with, there is no doubt that the trend of globalization has a wide range of benefits. Firstly, due to international trade which is favorable for all parties involved, every country can focus on some certain industries and exchange their products with other countries. This allows their productivity is enhanced significantly. Secondly, globalization promotes employment rate of developing countries and make it is possible for people in developed countries to buy high quality goods at quite reasonable price. For instance, almost of the big corporations such as Apple, Zara and Nike tend to have production plants in China to reduce cost of goods and bring more job opportunities to local people. Moreover, multinational companies help to provide fund, technology and managerial experience for developing countries.
However, I believe that globalization also causes some serious problems. First, a large number of local companies closed down in developing countries, as they were defeated in the competition with their transnational counterparts. This can lead to national economy which is totally dependent on foreign companies. Additionally, international companies do not give much importance to the environmental effects that they are causing in the host countries. According to a study of Vietnam National University in 2016, 45% of Foreign Direct Investment companies which did not apply less waste production process. If these problems are not handled properly, it might leads to serious consequences in local people’s lives.
In conclusion, while globalization has several advantages to communication and cooperation of all countries, I believe that negative impacts of this trend are greater.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...so causes some serious problems. First, a large number of local companies closed down in developi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60066006601 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26198182685 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617161716172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3521168383 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.133333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126925512805 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413622120155 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364618355182 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674238475645 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270129102541 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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