Stress related illnesses are becoming increasingly common What do you thing are the causes of this What solution can you suggest

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Stress-related illnesses are becoming increasingly common. What do you thing are the causes of this? What solution can you suggest?

In recent years, there have been lots of developments in many aspects, such as economics, politics, education and technology. Despite these improvements, human’s life seems to struggle with many vexing problems arising from stress-related illnesses. This essay sets out to indicate the causes and some methods to prevent this issue.
There are several reasons why this kind of sickness exists. It is believed that one of the most primary causes of stress is the amount of work people need to handle in their daily life. The more our society develops, the more works and studies are required. One illustration is that students these days, even those in primary schools, study at school and also extra-classes, leading them to come home at about 9:00 pm. This happens because the parents expect their children to be in top in class. Another cause of stress-related illness is family. Having a family, or simply a child, is stressful because it needs money, time and lots of caring.
Numerous reasons could be point out so as to reduce this situation. Relaxing is the key to solve the problem. People should take time for their own life, for hobbies or family instead of working and studying. Because stress-related illnesses are about mental health; therefore, healing and caring ourselves is a must. An alternative solution is sharing your negative thoughts to friends and family. By that, the stress and negative feelings would be relieved.
All in all, people need to be more relax and ‘enjoy the moment’ to absorb positive feelings; otherwise, stress might extend larger and brings about many others problems.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
.... Numerous reasons could be point out so as to reduce this situation. Relaxing is the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, as to, kind of, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12452830189 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67104778355 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645283018868 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5529430697 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8823529412 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5882352941 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82352941176 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13840360066 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481894862974 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559727496334 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778237211737 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032202222581 0.056905535591 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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