In the modern world, technology has become crucial to society. While it is important, teenagers these days are addicted to it. Studies show that nowadays youngsters are keen on socializing online rather than having a direct conversation. The problems come from many elements which will be further explained
Though, there are several reasons why this has become an issue. In my point of view, one of the main reasons is because of the rise in popularity of the Internet. With the skyrocketed increase of social media like Twitter, Facebook, etc… Adolescents choose this form of communication because they are shy from communicating face-to-face. Contact through the internet gives you a much wider range of folks to talk to. To conclude, for teenager social media have created a safer environment for interaction
Although, socializing online may have a positive impact but still exists cons that should be prevented. First, communities should open public places for meeting and gathering purposes. Schools are advised to arrange extra-curricular trips with group activity. For example camping and volunteer help to distract away from the phone or technology appliances. When the youngsters are unable to communicate directly, the public should take part in helping the child.
In conclusion the increasing amount of virtual contact has become more and more popular and accessible but there are still some dark sides. Especially when the large number of users are minors, it is easy to get addicted. Due to the rise of social media, adolescents will be wallow in it ,and we as an adult, must conduct as many action as possible to prevent it
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 287, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... media, adolescents will be wallow in it ,and we as an adult, must conduct as many...
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Line 4, column 325, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun action seems to be countable; consider using: 'many actions'.
Suggestion: many actions
...it ,and we as an adult, must conduct as many action as possible to prevent it
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, may, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18796992481 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82757754161 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646616541353 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5172977015 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139225396773 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403086953937 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388455416152 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076638637386 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332589951182 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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