Studying abroad can be highly motivated for students and also inspire their dreams. However, while studying abroad can have a number of positive effects on students, there are also many difficulties that they may meet along the way. With this in mind, it is more advantageous to study at home.
To what do you agree and disagree with this statement.
Indeed, every students wants go oversea country for higher education,as well as they inspired by many success story of their learner. studying at abroad there are myriad of advantages, whereas, some people believe that they have to face number of problems during the study.
First of all, doing study is the most advantage is gain practical knowledge. every student can explore their self with practical. For example, they aware about the current technology and how to do work with team members. The foreign countries mostly focus on real-time example, such as give assignment like survey or voluntary work as list goes on.
Secondly, they are spending ample of time in teaching instead of other task.Meanwhile they are arranging technical competition and encourage to explore your self and there is chance get good job placement based on their performance. Furthermore, they are proffer the training during study,so, they can aware about corporate life style means how to work in corporate environment.
On the other hand, they can struggle with different issues while study in unknown region. The main disadvantage is they have to manage everything their self. For instance, student can make meal, wash the cloths and keep home clean and tidy by self. Along with this much of task they have to concentrate on study because they have paid very high fees.
In recapitulation, i tend to believe that, if we want to earn some thing so we have to pay. studying abroad is the great opportunities to explore our self in multicultural environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14960629921 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7243639339 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629921259843 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1682162935 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4285714286 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299723864842 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103863881902 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638339133184 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158553521035 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817709802491 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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