A successful person is one who earns a lot of money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The above sentences claims that the successful person is person with bulk amount of the money. I completely agree with the above line. As the money is the feedback of the effort put on to the work. Many engineers, doctor’s and scientist are wealthy enough with the great effort pulled in the past.
Firstly, I would like to elaborate my stand in the more convenient way. An individual’s life is mixture of up’s and down. So with the phase the resultant is directed towards the big amount of the money which could help an individual. So the struggle towards up’s and down make the successful person and the result of which is lot of money.
Furthermore, many successful business man like Mukesh ambani have achieve a lot of the money with that of hard work during the phase. For example, A.P Sindhu always believed that a person is known by the wealth than that of the other things. Yet there are many politicians who earn money with the wrong activities. So this person cannot be termed as successful person. As it evolved many wrong activities for money.
Moreover, I conclude that the money come from the hard work and thus the combination the money and hard work leads to a successful. Hard work and money are the two wheel for the successful life. Thus I conclude that a person become successful by the means of the money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You should probably use 'claim'.
Suggestion: claim
The above sentences claims that the successful person is person wi...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...I completely agree with the above line. As the money is the feedback of the effort...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'achieved'.
Suggestion: achieved
...ul business man like Mukesh ambani have achieve a lot of the money with that of hard wo...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: P
...d work during the phase. For example, A.P Sindhu always believed that a person is...
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Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...nation the money and hard work leads to a successful. Hard work and money are the two wheel ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... the two wheel for the successful life. Thus I conclude that a person become success...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70464135021 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60665256824 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502109704641 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0086194087 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.6875 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8125 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249486884982 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916144207696 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067616373219 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151867709443 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043638173943 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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