To earn fame and fortune by playing a sport you are good at is a dream for many young people. While some people think that the exorbent wealth accumulated by some of the sports superstars is a fair compensation for their hard work and talent; others believe that the riches could be better served to people making more important contribution to the society.
The root of the argument, I believe, is a misalignment in the definition of an important contribution to the society between people. To some, the hard work to develop the skills to reach the pinecal of a sport is a source of emmence inspiration. It helps people strive to become better at what they do. How do we put a price on that?
Also, successful sportsmen are part of a group's identity. A world-class footballer, for example, represents their nation worldwide and thus are justly treated as a national hero at home. This is true for Olympic medal winners. They carry their nation's pride. This also goes down every level of human society, be it a school, city or a neighbourhood.
On the other hand, people are also concerned about what we should value in the society and how that affects what children decide to do with their lives. The success attained by talented sportsmen look amazing from afar but it should also be made clear that success is rare in the sports industry. Only a tiny minority become truly famous and attain such wealth, and usually factors like luck and connections play a bigger role than shear talent. This false hope can distract a child in their formative years and set them up for failure.
To conclude, I believe that at the end economics and the free market decides what someone's talent is worth and there is little merit in trying to determine someone's value at an individual level. Doing that could be a dangerous sliperry slope.
- Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 84
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 79
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...that the exorbent wealth accumulated by some of the sports superstars is a fair compensatio...
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Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'groups'' or 'group's'?
Suggestion: groups'; group's
...lso, successful sportsmen are part of a groups identity. A world-class footballer, fo...
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Line 7, column 281, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... made clear that success is rare in the sports industry. Only a tiny minority become t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, thus, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72585669782 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56036485909 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598130841121 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2566781897 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2352941176 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76470588235 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16419166489 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430002929961 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570479837912 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087392967964 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796413815368 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.