Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions.Some people think this is fully justified while other think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Sport is the only factor that can be used fo getting enjoyment and also for earning money. There are many examples of sports person who earn a lot by their profession of sports,which is too much in comparison of other people who is in other vital profession. some people support this notion while other have refused to agree with this. This essay will elucidate both sides before jumping into a final conclusion.
First and foremost, there are some people who famous for their awesome sports ability. They are richer than the man's who does another type of business and or jobs. One of the most reason is that, nowadays government of many countries give a high package of salary to the sportsmen. Some people believe that paying this type of high salary to them is a perfect thing because they play for nation on their physical and mental risks. In addition they won the titles and make their country proude. According to a survey of Indian sport club,Virat Kohli is paid 7 crores annually for playing cricket for Indian cricket team. Moreover, it is also supported by Indian cricket team's fans and they know the value of sportsmen and they appreciate them for contributing to the nation.
On the other hand, that's the truth that no one can be without haters, This thing apply in this state also. Some people think that pay do much to sportsmen is not good thing because there are many people who live under poverty and who need some money to live a happy life. So they think that government should also think on this part. There are some other people like soldiers, teachers and many more, who really entitled of that money. So it is also the thing why people refusing to give more salary to sportsmen.
To conclude, in my opinion it is good to give a high package to sportsmen but government should give a some part of that money to other professions who also deserve this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, really, so, while, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64179104478 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26402905868 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50447761194 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3146167451 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4705882353 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266672484794 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092560713594 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632269347495 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183103189747 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851151579138 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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