At present, sport professionals are increasing their income by being popular thanks to the development of social media while other experts dedicate to the society more than that in different fields but in lower celeries. This essay will discuss both views before giving personal opinion.
Admittedly, sportsmen have to undergo harsh training before achieving their goals. Furthermore, if they win a worldscale, not only will their popularity increase, it also brings pride to their national identity. Consequently, they have significant influence on people all over the world and earn money from that.
Obviously, other professionals have to go through a long time practicing intensively, this process is even tougher than sport players. Surprisingly, specialists in other fields may take their whole life to study something new. Secondly, their achievements can help humanity perhaps a thousand years later. On the other hand, sportsmen’s prize can just bring pride to their country temporarily
To conclude, it is unfair that sport players can earn a great deal more money than people in other fields. I highly recommend that people shouldn’t focus on entertainment more than scientific achievements that supports humanity
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...y will discuss both views before giving personal opinion. Admittedly, sportsmen have to undergo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 187.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59893048128 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94890574086 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.695187165775 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3488365941 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.7 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278794988375 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100880555077 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893374724714 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174677373028 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967051248767 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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