It is commonly thought that the huge amount of money which gain by people who do sports professionally is more deserved than the other sporters who have career in different areas. I think, this money is earning complete fairly by triumphant sportsmen.
First of all, if a person have an ability to any kind of sports and he/she do the sports in the decent way, then it is inevitable that person became successful and famous furthermore. Because, sports and some significant sport leauges are too essential for plenty of people and thus, there is enormous money in sports community and even though bet on games. Of course, it is totally normal that a person wants to earn high salary profession-independent. So, sports professionals can make an effort to being successfull and become known.
Secondly, people in other important professions are able to earn a great quantity of money and no one is blocking them. However, there is obviously popularization on sports and maybe it will change in future years. Hence, the other sporters’ expenditures will increase surely. For example, archery was very unpopular sport in few years ago in my country but after 2020 olympics, it liked and watched by myriad people. Because our olympic sporter had gained gold medal and he became pretty famous.
In conclude, it is argued by some that the fairness about the amount of money that earned by some professional athletes and the other ones. I believe, this is not unfair and they deserve to gain this much money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...bility to any kind of sports and he/she do the sports in the decent way, then it i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, i think, kind of, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96062992126 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8379683064 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625984251969 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2183672416 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9230769231 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306190380788 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963857289186 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730727896841 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177369422765 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335986263532 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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