Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Discus both these views and give your own opinion.
The Athletes who become a successful persons gain a great money rather than other famous persons in other fields and professions. I think sports men and women should gain more money than others because their occupations are very hard but on other side other occupations are hard too.
In most of sports filed the age of retired is under 40 and it is very important that athletes keep their body on shape and ready anytime. In other occupation the retired age is higher than sport and people who have an especial career can continue it. The sport athlete’s time to show their ability is very short about 10 years but other fields have approximately 35 years.
It is not true that sports fields are easy. If people want to follow an especial sport filed, they will face difficult problems such as diet, time of sleep, exercise, and etc. It is very hard to do these in log time while other fields and careers do not have these restrictions. At the first it looks like easy but for professional sports men and women who want to become a successful person have to follow these limitations is very hard.
On other side important professions such as actors, engineers, dentists and etc. there are o lot of people who earn money more than sport professionals but it is not true about all of them. Unfortunately, in most of countries governments and political men and women notice on sport professionals more than other fields and careers that make others unhappy. Although sport fields are important, pay attention to other fields is more important.
Totally, there are two sides that both of them have right. There are different reasons which show this fact.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'person'?
Suggestion: person
The Athletes who become a successful persons gain a great money rather than other fa...
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Line 2, column 4, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the sports') or simply say ''most sports''.
Suggestion: most of the sports; most sports
...ide other occupations are hard too. In most of sports filed the age of retired is under 40 an...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
... such as diet, time of sleep, exercise, and etc. It is very hard to do these in log time...
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Line 4, column 73, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...ons such as actors, engineers, dentists and etc. there are o lot of people who earn mone...
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Line 4, column 209, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
...ue about all of them. Unfortunately, in most of countries governments and political men and women...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, while, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76388888889 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52134980935 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496527777778 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9315172383 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26666666667 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318704240925 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110072848759 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650854378414 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171587522426 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853741182991 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.