Supporters of technology say that it solves problems and makes life better. Opponents argue that technology creates new problems that may threaten or damage the quality of life. Using one or two examples, discuss these two positions. Which view of technol

In today's technological era, the latest trends in technology have sorted out many issues in life and made it comfortable. However, this new development has given birth to new problem which deteriorate the quality of life. I strongly favour to the latest developements which have proved to be a boon to whole mankind and my essay will justify it relevant justifications.

At the outset, the new developments in the mobile communications have drastically changed the scenario of communication. For instance, in earlier days landline was only mode of communication but in today's world with advent of Facebook, Whatsapp the customers can connect to their near and dear ones at minimal cost. Now with the click of a finger on the smartphone inhabitants can call globally at any time. Therefore,this has solved the major problem of communication which was not possible easily ten decades ago.

Another reason is that, the recent invention of driverless car in America has sorted out the accident problems in that country. For example, research has proved that after this invention the percentage of road accidents on the highways has been reduced by fifty percent. The main reason behind the decrease of accidents is that these car detect the speedy cars which come opposite in their directions and with the help of sensor stop automatically or change their way. Thus the accidents problem has reduced sharply with this latest invention.

To recapitulate, technology always strives to make the life easier and safer for the whole society.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...communication. For instance, in earlier days landline was only mode of communication...
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Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
...can call globally at any time. Therefore,this has solved the major problem of communi...
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Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this car' or 'these cars'?
Suggestion: this car; these cars
...ehind the decrease of accidents is that these car detect the speedy cars which come oppos...
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Line 5, column 470, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...stop automatically or change their way. Thus the accidents problem has reduced sharp...
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Line 5, column 479, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'accidents'' or 'accident's'?
Suggestion: accidents'; accident's
...matically or change their way. Thus the accidents problem has reduced sharply with this l...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19277108434 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95399476356 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610441767068 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7071745939 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.75 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179249804115 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067375755622 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670260863573 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113360528748 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598537892587 0.056905535591 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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