The 21st century has begun.what changes do you think this new century will bring?use examples and details in your answer.
With the advancement of time,there has been an improvement in the lives of people all around the world due to the inventions of technology in the previous era so, with a new era the expectations is also higher.In my opinion, the 21st century will bring more advanced technology,climate changes and shift towards renewable resources.
First, many countries are spending a huge sum of money on technological innovation and industrial development.There will be lot more automatic machines in the industry which will help human to carry day to day task.Technological advancement might replace human resources which will create an unemployment issue.
Second,there will be changes in weather patterns in the next century.with the increase in temperature like long summer than winter.for example, the world will experience hot weathers with short winters.In addition with continuous use of fossils and CFC's etc pollution levels are also expected to reach in alarming levels,which could be life threatening.
lastly,there will be a shift towards renewable sources of energy.As the current stock of fossil fuels like coal begin to decline,people will shift towards cleaner sources of energy like solar, wind etc.There will be more solar cars, heaters and other solar devices in future. Also, many countries will begin to use nuclear power as an effective method to produce electricity.
In summary 21st century will lead to many changes like scientific development and technological advancement ,change in climatic patterns and increase in the average temperature and shifts towards renewable source of energy. while some of these changes will be a boon, others can be detrimental and need to be taken in an appropriate manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, second, so, while, for example, in addition, in summary, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48689138577 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22520843486 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.8117361202 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 209.285714286 106.682146367 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.1428571429 20.7667163134 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5714285714 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152744668821 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814996058812 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437456083593 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921625428099 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407759801973 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 13.0946893788 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 50.2224549098 49% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.