Nowadays, in many developed countries, people experience being over-weighted. Unfortunately, societies in which folks can have more than enough amount of needed nutrition, don't care about poor people around the world. On the other hand, people's approach to their physical body and being in shape is under the influence of commercialized and fashion world. Moreover, some people spent so much time to gain the standards of a contemporary humankind body while, the others are hopeless to attain that picture of themselves, which, makes them fat and out-of-shape in a long period.
First and foremost reason for the increasing number of people who aren't healthy is related to the duality of the poor and wealthy. In another word, the lack of a global system that allows different countries to have a sufficient amount of food for each individual starts a significant issue on both sides of the world. Some people have infinitive access to a variety of meals while others have to sleep at nights with an empty stomach.
Secondly, there is no hesitation that modern human is affected by mass media which can introduce and begin some new boundaries. A regular person who is under the pressure of a single type of life-style, which is very fancy and attractive, wants to get those features by his/her body. There aren't so many people who could make satisfaction on their minds about those standards. Furthermore, when a normal individual feels that he/she doesn't have an ideal body, it makes that person anxious. Thus, after a while, the physical body doesn't matter that much to the person. Experiencing a high level of stress sometimes causes to eat more than the needed amount of food.
To sum up, it seems that there are so many problems and a few answers to this international matter. But, perhaps a big change in the economy of the world is needed. An alter program may aim for the biggest world problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90092879257 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68900375844 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9920050707 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9375 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.098605318139 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321424817685 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0253493593618 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0562902834913 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166650656855 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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