Talk about the pros/cons of this era as is full of invention. And discuss recent invention that you think is good or bad to society.
In last 100 years there is a colossal upsurge in technological advancement, from antibiotics to space crafts and computer to nuclear science. There is a widespread worry that this era which is the most advanced stage in human history, will also lead to myriad of consequences as well. Although, I am not completely agree with this and I will explain in this essay.
There are number of arguments which highlights the benefits of this era. On the one hand, thanks to these innovations we are living the quality life and we can connect and communicate instantly. At the other hand, improved medical researches are now healing the most deadly diseases in few days. I believe that in all these inventions computer is the most beneficial in all means, it helped in every field to bring all mankind to this level. Needless to say, that computer and all the innovations put society at good stead, as far as benefiting the humanity is concerned.
This era with all these benefits does not lack with the drawbacks. The most preponderant one is that people are now became distant from their close relations. They are getting more busy due to fact paced and challenging world. They are filling the gap of relatives and friends from television and I pad devices. Hence, it is apparent that why many people said that this era has many impacts on humanity.
In view of the arguments outlined above, we can conclude that this era has many benefits due to technological innovations but it is not without drawbacks as well.
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- Talk about the pros/cons of this era as is full of invention. And discuss recent invention that you think is good or bad to society. 56
- Talk about the pros/cons of this era as is full of invention. And discuss recent invention that you think is good or bad to society. 56
- Talk about the pros/cons of this era as is full of invention. And discuss recent invention that you think is good or bad to society. 56
- In education system, assessment through formal written examination still valid? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'inventions'' or 'invention's'?
Suggestion: inventions'; invention's
...n few days. I believe that in all these inventions computer is the most beneficial in all ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80842911877 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6975737862 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547892720307 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5157880745 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6428571429 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113873774565 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040381600138 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379346778677 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070757706495 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00547014260438 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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