Work-life is very bussy of every person and everyone is only earning for a better life. Masses mere work for their complete their demands, therefore they start the work from adult age. This notion is going to the positive side. Thus I'm going toward the agree side.
There are many reasons why these types of people do this. Two major are, make money for their another activity and buy the stuff. To begin with, It is clear that many children start work from an early age, so that they save for their education and home and so on. This thing they make to strong and experience holder. For example, If a pupil does work as well as a study then he will have earned when that student grows up. Moreover, young people earn money to buy their necessary things, like laptops, mobile and books. This habit with they do not beg money from their guardian. That's what a child becomes more excel than others.
Furthermore, In retirement, they do not do concern about money and medicals fees. Firstly, It is true that when a person does work from childhood then they have more work experience and chunky money and so on. Due to this factor, they do not worry about money in old age. Such as, In old age, a human has not better service of food and lack of family help, then they buy meal service from the market. Secondly, after retirement, old masses feel more health problems. They their money spend on medical treatment so that they live long in overage.
To sum up, Earning money is not a bad thing. If a person makes money from childhood or after graduation.
- Task 2 The increase in people s life expectancy means that they have to work older to pay for their retirement One alternative is that people start to work at younger age Some people think this is a positive development To what extent do you agree or disa 61
- Task 2 The increase in people s life expectancy means that they have to work older to pay for their retirement One alternative is that people start to work at younger age Some people think this is a positive development To what extent do you agree or disa 61
- Task 2 The increase in people s life expectancy means that they have to work older to pay for their retirement One alternative is that people start to work at younger age Some people think this is a positive development To what extent do you agree or disa 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'bettered', 'welled'.
Suggestion: bettered; welled
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, such as, as well as, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50883392226 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07494824782 2.80592935109 74% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558303886926 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.872608126 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.8 106.682146367 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.15 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265000462644 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806670181463 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568294881747 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153793670431 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985291142525 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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