Nowadays, food manufactures produce high sugar level foods and drinks, which are harmful to people and cause many diseases. Some people believe these kinds of products should become more expensive so that the amount of sugar consumption becomes less. I completely disagree with this statement and explain my reasons in this essay.
If the surgery beverages and food become affluent, fewer people could use them. This kind of product has been becoming a recreation for people, which means, for example, drinking soda as high sugar beverage, in watching a soccer match is a popular entertainment. Therefore, if the price of soda rises, the fewer people can afford to buy, and finally, the less sugar product would be consumed. However, something the worse replaces soda, such as cigarettes or alcoholic drinks, which have more adverse impacts on our bodies.
Secondly, consumer’s health awareness should be raised by different means of communication. A practical way to reduce consumption is to inform people them about their well-being, and what these kinds of products could play a better healthy role in their lives. If they know the health problems caused by sugary beverages and industrial foods, they will avoid them. In addition, there is an indirect way to minimize negative outcomes of the products. These types of products have disastrous effects on our organs bodies, but what makes it worse is our sedentary lifestyle. Exercising can reduce the unhealthy repercussions of sugary products, which means there is no problem if you burn the energy of these kinds of products through exercising. For instance, you could drink a Coca-Cola if you have time to squeeze in 30 minutes running in your daily schedule.
In conclusion, since we live in a world in which these kinds of products are ubiquitous, we should find a better way to alleviate their health problems. As abovementioned, exercising and raising peoples’ awareness are better ways than increasing its price.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21943573668 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77581914441 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595611285266 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4503577086 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353863861118 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100828141036 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828683553945 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205184988378 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952089026563 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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