Task 2: Many people are now spending more and more time travelling to work or school, some people believe that this has negative development while others think there are some benefits. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
While some people contend that using much more time travelling to work or school bringing some drawbacks, others believe that there are benefits to develope many abilities by long way movement. I agree with the view that schedule should be use more effective.
On the one hand, there are strong arguments that causing many badly influences on people when they have to move to long distance area as well as suffering by transportation. Firstly, expenditure for accomodation or vehicles in different places could be exceeded compared with budget of average in-come people, for example, high cost of living in big cities, free of transportation. Secondly, it is clear that many serious influence on health and mentality in long time which occur diseases, such as stress or die of exhaustion.
On the other hand, there are some who argue that it bring some advantageous development for people. In some countries, people force to choose schools or workplaces in far away from home which have higher education system or well-paid jobs. Furthermore, people realize that they should have experienced in order to obtain a their success or comprehending various cultures in new places.
In conclusion, there are good reasons why many people spend much more time to travelling for opportunity of their life, but in my opinion, it is not necessary to gain a success.
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Message: Did you mean 'choosing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: choosing
...people. In some countries, people force to choose schools or workplaces in far away from ...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'their'?
Suggestion: a; their
...uld have experienced in order to obtain a their success or comprehending various cultur...
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Suggestion:
...cultures in new places. In conclusion, there are good reasons why many people s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11659192825 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82773029793 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641255605381 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6927003909 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.777777778 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.1111111111 7.06120827912 242% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332158219981 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129876515971 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120711923055 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209947271391 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121034871093 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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