The advancement of food producing technology has become an issue discussed globally. Some people opine that the availability of mass produced food with affordable prices has many benefits for society, whilst other argue it actually brings more harm than good. This essay will try to discuss the opposing notions and in the conclusion my opinion on the topic.
To begin with, the availability of more food and at lower prices will lead to an increased level of society's purchasing power. Specifically, this will help economically disadvantaged people to support food for themselves. On top of that, the advancement of genetic engineering will also enable people to produce substitute of various rare food or other innovative food that will be beneficial for society.
In contrast, there are some disadvantages that need to be tackled following this progress. The use of machine in food factories has and will replace the need of man power, leading to an increased in the number of jobless people who could have actually worked at the blue collar level in this business. However, this could actually be solved with active role of governments and society to give training and education to these people so they can have even better jobs. As for the genetic engineering, some people are worried about the safety of food produced from this mechanisms. This actually should not be any problems because before the genetically modified food are sold to market, there are several healthy checks to be tested.
To sum up, while technology has allowed people to purchase more food and tackle food scarcity, some people still worry about its negative effects on employment and food danger. However, there are some possible strategies to counter all the aforementioned negative effects, thus I personally believe the benefits of food producing technology outnumber its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'bettered', 'welled'.
Suggestion: bettered; welled
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'while', 'as for', 'in contrast', 'to begin with', 'to sum up', 'on top of that']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.250764525994 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.162079510703 0.155533422707 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.085626911315 0.0946595960268 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0489296636086 0.0501214627716 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0214067278287 0.0437548338989 49% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122324159021 0.122226691241 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0550458715596 0.0403226058552 137% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80047330703 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0428134556575 0.0326793684256 131% => OK
Particles: 0.00305810397554 0.00163938923432 187% => OK
Determiners: 0.103975535168 0.0861772015684 121% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0305810397554 0.021408717616 143% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0122324159021 0.011925033212 103% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1876.0 1933.35771543 97% => OK
No of words: 301.0 316.048096192 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.23255813953 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.388704318937 0.374742101984 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295681063123 0.28420135186 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.212624584718 0.203846283523 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.139534883721 0.137316102897 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80047330703 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.037074148 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56146179402 0.56093040696 100% => OK
Word variations: 59.2361123662 60.7387585426 98% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 23.1538461538 20.7743622355 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2344821122 49.517814964 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.307692308 127.492653851 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7743622355 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 52.7219524661 49.1944974215 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.84210526316 1.69124875643 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38188800912 0.332605444948 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117573122063 0.102741220458 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0512392821122 0.0668466124924 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.588004568156 0.534860350844 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.112415463054 0.148594505496 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167826410334 0.134430193775 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369400013622 0.0742795772207 50% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.379922921579 0.324371583561 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0482349724862 0.0638462369009 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259827386614 0.228012699653 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396392418659 0.058150111329 68% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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