Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others.
Do you agree or disagree?
At the present time, enhancement in technology television is a one of the most common electronic gadget worldwide. Too many humans beings are spending their leisure time by watching time consuming programs on televisions. Watching programs on TV such as movies,cartoons and series are making people lethargic and stay away from social activities. As per my perception i completely agree with this. My opinion with proper justification are describe further in following paragraphs.
Considering my opinion, the foremost argument is that addiction of TV programs especially in children and teenagers.TV consist lot of program related to all type of generations and provide time flexiblity to all. For example, Budding generation generally prefer to watch cartoons, which make them too much addicted. Especially, teenager loss their productive time to see series and movies rather than doing study or work. Hence, spending more time among television can create detrimental effect on juvenile as well as youngster.
In addition to this,today people especially young person are stay away from extracurricular activities such as cricket,hockey and badminton. People also have less intrest in social activities after increase the craze of TV. To illustrate, people are becoming lethargic because they are not participating in outdoor activities such as running, cycling and many more outdoor games. After coming from work people often like to watch TV program rather than being socialize. Hence, because of above reasons obesity and other disastrous impact on human body are increased gradually.
To conclude, people have to watch only news as well as knowledge related program such as discovery and national geography no more than that. otherwise it creats damaging impact on human brain and body. More and more people need to interconnect with socialization and physical activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, well, for example, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55400696864 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99792933189 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616724738676 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0461229404 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7647058824 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193516167953 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597250334989 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035683643412 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115065750625 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521761208063 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.