It is claimed that the second nature of people is to imitate each other which caused popularity in the scope of fashion and shopping. I firmly agree with this statement and in this essay, I will present my explanations.
To begin with, human beings by nature are social, for this reason, they aim to become a part of a community where feelings such as a sense of belonging and staying engaged in the world are paramount. In order to achieve that, people are inclined to follow chosen role models in the form of influential celebrities who also act as a trendsetter and by all means would follow them. To give an illustration, younger generations gravitate toward wearing the same piece of clothes or eating the same food as well as using the same model of mobile phone. Therefore, the tendency of the crowd to imitate more powerful individuals with eminent appearances brings about popularity in fashion and commodities.
Furthermore, fashion designers and manufacturers have taken advantage of implementing affluent people in their new season's look to spark off the interest among consumers. This straightforward way to have a resemblance with favorites whether it can be actors or athletes inspire people to buy. In addition, having copied from fashion masterpieces, it may become hugely popular with high demand but at the same time with affordable price. It is therefore clear that seeking to keep up with another world would create the same combination of goods for average people.
In conclusion, the public tends to indulge themselves by copying the appearance of someone who has a higher rank in society. To accommodate their needs and make a profit, fashion designers and productions seize the opportunity to replicate any goods at an affordable price.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, look, may, second, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06529209622 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89828675782 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621993127148 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3611373909 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 122.833333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152035716925 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504921758809 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283211923127 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845656401104 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0103099989368 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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