The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree.
" Fashion is a instant language". In the current time of technological advancement. One of the most pressing concerns is regarding to this topic is that should people follow the fashionable trends; those becomes without or not? through this essay. I completely agree to this statement . I shall explore my point of view from various aspects in the following paragraphs.
To sum up that fashionable is very important role in every people life although more and more is created a dangerous situation when they achieve maximum from their earnings or bedget.
On one side, there is a group of people who believe that fashion is a great impact on youth life in the presence time of 21 century. Moreover , youth have mostly attacked to follow the new trend and update keep for fashionable. Moving a head, it has the one of most pressingly role is for show of purpose mostly everyone follow the new clothes fashion for incline personality like shows to another . Afterthat, those people have mostly more money and very richest people they can follow every trend update by fashion.
On other hand, there is a group of people who believe that becomes is a second most influence on development of personality for citizens. On moving, people are gain popularity by their follow the new things as well as, they have differ from others. Regarding this, they have mostly follow purpose everyone adapt those people trend , and for keep look like that person type that have mostly people follow the trend like celebrating. As refer epitome for this essay is that people are greatly following the every thing of celebrating by advertising in television, laptop, phone, computer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, regarding, second, so, well, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01075268817 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64643788096 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519713261649 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5634431478 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0646678668671 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0250212732303 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322300566034 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0443912457927 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295299140483 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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