In recent years, companies usually introduce their products with new features. In my opinion, there are several reasons why this is the case, and I believe that this trend would be a positive development for both businesses and society.
There are various reasons why businesses promote that their products are new and unique. Customers nowadays want to try new experience is one of these reasons for this trend. It is true that trying a new thing always is a appealing activity and it seems to be an inborn character of people. For example, when we go to the movie theater, we tend to choose the newest films rather than an old one. Furthermore, businesses want to become the pioneer in their fields. Exotic products would attract more attention and that make their brands more popular. Products have new features such as environment-friendly, reusable, and less packaging are often received a good response from customers.
In my opinion, businesses have new goods would be a positive development. Firstly, when companies want to emphasize that their products are new, they must be improved constantly. For example, mobile phone manufacturers are developing both software and hardware to introduce unique, state-of-the-art models to promote their sales, new feature is always one of the most important factors in their strategies. Secondly, new products with impressive technologies would meet the changing customer needs and social requirements. People are captivated by new technologies such as artificial intelligence so such products would be easy to sell. Finally, developing new products would help new company to compete with large company and help well-known business to remain successful.
In conclusion, businesses nowadays spend money on promoting new product benefit both customers and companies and I believe that this trend would be more popular in the future.
- The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024 67
- The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999 78
- The chart below shows the total number of minutes in billions of telephone calls in the UK divided into three categories from 1995 2002 56
- The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with predictions for 2030 and 2040 78
- The chart below shows the amount of time that 10 to 15 year olds spend chatting on the Internet and playing on games consoles on an average school day in the UK 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 220, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... true that trying a new thing always is a appealing activity and it seems to be a...
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Line 4, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd would be more popular in the future.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35810810811 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99298394338 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537162162162 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0653062207 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.125 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323631263307 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122117627734 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701357969834 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222796200993 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544660553956 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.