In today’s world, many people in metropolitan cities are not acquittance with others living in same neighborhood. This essay will address fast-pace of living style as the primary reason of this problem and propose monthly social gathering in the society as a viable solution to tackle this issue.
Many people in big cities live in highly hectic day which makes them do not have adequate time to develop friendship and bound with their neighbor in the society. This mainly because of they spend most of their times at the offices. Consequently, if this phenomenon is not solved by people in the society or by government, in the future, there will be no social support from people living in similar areas and people may live in very individual world.
To solve this issue, the local government or the people in the society have to initiate monthly or quarterly social meetings for people in the neighborhood. This way, people have a chance to interact with each other. A success story of this method had happened in one of residential area in the heart of Jakarta city. People settling in the neighborhood have to attend quarterly meeting conducted by the village head. If there is a head of the family do not obey this policy, they must pay large amount of money to compensate their absence. Thus, by having scheduled social gathering in the neighborhood, people are having sufficient social interaction with others in community.
To sum up, although people nowadays live in very busy lives, they have to allocate their time to know other members in the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 176, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...ir neighbor in the society. This mainly because of they spend most of their times at the office...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, so, thus, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9022556391 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60973750253 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541353383459 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8764046942 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200834948344 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834835454161 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360287169039 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128836030198 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349527713773 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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