There are many companies selling their products worldwide. Does it bring advantages or disadvantages. Show your opinions.
Nowadays, there are many businesses which have their own kinds of stuff be traded spread all over the world. It can not be denied that this positive change not only brings a lot of benefits for companies themselves but also builds up for countries' development.
First and foremost, from the company's perspective, the more products being sold worldwide, the more reputable companies being expanded. For instance, Apple a technology brand from America - which has its technological creations such as mobile phones, computers, i-pads,...be bought by people all around the world. With the financial profits, this trading has brought, the more people buy its products, the number of people who know about Apple has been raised. Today, It becomes the most popular brand in the technological aspect.
In addition, from society's perspective, the advantage of being bought by the main part of the population also makes the whole economic field in this country be built. Along with that, it creates more jobs for employees inside the nation. Moreover, the country's position in the world also changes in a positive way. A well-known product can bring a well-known company then make a country be worldwide. Therefore, authority nowadays tries to encourage and creates more priorities for enterprises to increase the number of products being sold.
To conclude, companies now have chosen to sell their products in large-scale and it becomes a trend for all businesses around the world to follow up because of the benefits it brings for both company and this own country.
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- There are many companies selling their products worldwide Does it bring advantages or disadvantages Show your opinions 85
- The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and theUSA between 1920 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21428571429 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74011982428 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575396825397 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9264962256 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160186598657 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572571924774 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639979506416 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109144662049 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416297149477 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.