There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Music is an indispensable thing in human life and also has a great influence on people worldwide . I argue with the idea that traditional music is more important than international music.]
There are a number of reasons why everyone should have music in their lives. First, music can help people reduce stress, fatigue in life because music stimulates …. For example, in hospitals for people with suicidal tendencies, music is often played for the purpose of psychological treatment. Second, music can help increase study concentration and work eficiency, For example, in China large university libraries, music is often played baroque music to increase concentration and reduce noise from outside the libraries.
In my opinions, traditional music is appreciated more than international music. current international music is focusing on negative thing such as violence ,sex, drugs ,which can adversely affects young people. According to US statistics, the crime rate increased by 7% after the growth of international music and became popular with listeners. On the contrary, traditionals music brings positive emotions and carriers national characters. Traditional music also has the effect of helping people more unite, because of that traditional music is often played before sports matches.
In conclusion, people around the world couldn‘ t live without music. I think that traditional music should be given more attention than international music.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66363636364 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99170656027 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595454545455 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9812620672 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.833333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.501233911803 0.244688304435 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.240369113972 0.084324248473 285% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127362614995 0.0667982634062 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.376240692498 0.151304729494 249% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599265484633 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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