Now a days, music plays a very important role. as the people in the modern society are suffering by a alot of tensions and pressures in life,they need a relaxation to hideup these all.hence,they prefer music to get relax and make the life tension-free.
Music not only making our mental stress free but also human body.as there are many types of music bands are releasing we used the music for all our activities.like,one is listening to the music the other is dancing to that music
In my point of view traditional music is much better than the outer country musi because,we can easily bond to the traditional music.as we are the people of native country we can easily understand the lyrics and the intension behind the music.
From my heart I like to listen the melodies band of my own country music.when I hear the background art nothing can beat that feeling.
In my country most of the teenagers are attracting and addicting to the other country music like pop bands.but,I suggest every one to take care of our native music.sometimes I also like to listen other music because to know the culture of that.i prefer to listen English songs next to my native music only to understand the lyrics and to improve the listening skills.
In these days as the population is increasing everybody need a peaceful life for that most of the job holders are in familiar with yoga and nature.
There are many instruments to makeup the music.each instrument is famous for its own functionality that is playing a role to freeup the human being.
Personally I'm requesting the people to honour the traditional native music first.
Thanking you all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80212014134 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79429123917 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52296819788 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 141.650935946 49.4020404114 287% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.0 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4444444444 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373296722733 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141846973323 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11262435258 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154062562437 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104248619877 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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