There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of country more important than the international music that is hard everywhere nowadays
Music is becoming very precious day by day. It plays a crucial role in daily lives which makes individual as feel free while they are facing major issues. It is universal that music has various types nowadays. I go along with the statement to large extent and my explanation is validate with proper examples and reasons
To embark with, music has various types such as classical,western, jazz and pop and so on, thus all have their different characteristics. Every individual should aware about the music because it gives amusement that people will be stress relief. It has many benefits while listening a music that keep human mind calm.it simply represents the pain of human body that can be thrown out by signing .music has lots of power to explore the human art.it is used to cheer up you mood and state of mind.the world is divided into many different cultures and every part has its own identity. People from different countries have their own likes and dislikes.mostly individual prefer classical music over high pitch..
However, It has many kinds of arguments about the traditional music and international. According to any cities old age people choose their religion singer songs but the youth who grow up day by day, they does not believe in this trend they are just accept and enjoy about what they get from any kind of music and it should be any kind off.it id very appropriate things that some people more inspired by listening listening to their own religion songs.however, international music is also helpful for their tradition as well as they teach multiple kinds if things such as vocals, instrument timing then video graphy and so on. Current Situation is too speedy for all categories and it is also good while younger listen international music they will get the brief knowledge about the culture and also get the language fluency.
To recapitulate, it is all about the situation that people are leaving nowadays where traditional music is important for those who love their country we blindly while international music is also important for those who are growing up and learning news things everyday.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, thus, well, while, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95810055866 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68815095385 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564245810056 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 141.895200532 49.4020404114 287% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.363636364 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5454545455 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32626217177 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14676978566 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748870828693 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204307752034 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544701887024 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.