Music the term itself revels the meaning of entertainment.Most of people have hectic and busy schedule nowadays,which makes them tedious.Music is a form of entertainment by which people remove their stress and burden.different kinds of music are there in every nook and corner of the world.In this essay,I will discuss the needs of music in people's lives.
To begin with, every human kinds needs some entertainment medias in their lives to feel relax.Music is the only way to take out one's sorrow and stress.Moreover,it is like an energy taking machine by which masses can feel energetic.In addition,folks can charge inner battery by listening music.For instance,during travelling,if there is a no music , a person might feel blunt in journey.In short, music is known as stress buster as well as energy gaining machine which gives necessary breaks to people from their tedious routine.
Although there are various kind of music,Most of people give their first preference to their traditional music compare to international one.A person can realize the value of one's culture and tradition by only listening traditional music.Apart from this, it is quite easy to listen and understand the words of any traditional songs.
To recapitulate,it is quite ardous to imagine our life without having music because in this fast paced life ,music is essential to survive ourselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 41.998997996 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 382.0 1615.20841683 24% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 73.0 315.596192385 23% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23287671233 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.92301278569 4.20363070211 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27021622072 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 52.0 176.041082164 30% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.712328767123 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 114.3 506.74238477 23% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.5 49.4020404114 264% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 191.0 106.682146367 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.5 20.7667163134 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165102072178 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103516598337 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815597475899 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103516598337 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815597475899 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.0946893788 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 78.4519038076 24% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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