There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Currently, people are listening a host of various kinds of music around the world. I extremely believe that music is necessary in our lives and I personally suppose that traditional music is much more significant than international one.
It is undeniable that from past to present music has been playing a crucial role in our lives. This is due to the fact that music is something which has accompanied all people since childhood time. It means that, as children, people have taught loads of songs by their parents and teachers as ways of learning language or simply as a form of enjoyment. Then later in life, music become a part of their life stories, because it can convey any human feeling and emotion through the melody of songs which people listen to everyday. So, they can see themselves in each song which bring them into a relaxation.
When it come to national characteristic, traditional music might be seen as much more vital than international one. This is because such music was a part of culture identity which express the customs and history of a particular country. Moreover, traditional music is the means of connecting people from generation to generation. By listening to such music, people, especially teenager might raise aware of culture and tradition of their nation. Therefore, it would be a real pity if international music became so predominant that these national styles disappeared.
In conclusion, perennially, music is still an essential part of human life. although, nowadays people have access to a great deal of different types of music in the world, from my view point, I really suppose that traditional music is much more important than international music.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: every day
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Message: Did you mean 'comes'?
Suggestion: comes
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, really, so, still, then, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08896797153 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86961196212 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572953736655 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3830148051 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.142857143 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425515720034 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160578346513 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121240882156 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311504623417 0.151304729494 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127047683465 0.056905535591 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.