There aren’t many houses to accommodate people so it has several social consequences. Only the government can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
According to the statement, there are not enough spaces for many houses for the accomodation of masses which leads to numerous social impacts. Legal authorities us the only way to solve this cause. According to my point of view, both government and public plays vital role in this criteria and reasons are discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, from few past decades, there is huge incline in the rate of population. Birth rates increase day by day. Due to which, there is necessity for maximum count of spaces for the construction of houses to accommodate residents. In this criteria, most of the citizens prefer to live in urban politans which leads to shortage of landscapes. In that particular manner, legal committees should play essential role. Because,if they increase the property rates or construct appartments or flats with number of storeys rather than to build house for single households. Thus, this shows positive impact to solve this issue. Due to this, people prefer to live in small appartments with low rents which becomes comfortable to them. Because, if residents live in cities, then they also become able to recieve superior services such as transportation, medical, electrical and so on. As a result, in this manner government become probable to overcome the issue of accomodation.
On contrast, although government may overcome the cause of housing. Instead, individuals also shows extreme part to solve this problem. Because, most of the individuals prefer to migrate towards metropolitan due to numerous reasons. Although, these are basic necessities and also profitable for them to migrate. However, they do not show concern towards numerous problems such as traffic jams, proliferation of pollution in big cities and industrialisation which shows catastrophic aspects on human health in penty of ways and so on. Thus, they should aware from these issues and appreciate to live in countrysides and so on. Therefore , this proy become overcome. As a result, they live in eco friendly and hygienic environment.
To recapitulate, it seems to me as,both legal authorities and residents play vital role to overcome the shortage of housing in urban areas such as construction of appartments, prefer to live in countryside areas with all services and so on.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 277, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...vernment and public plays vital role in this criteria and reasons are discussed in t...
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Line 2, column 242, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... of houses to accommodate residents. In this criteria, most of the citizens prefer t...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...tees should play essential role. Because,if they increase the property rates or con...
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Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ows extreme part to solve this problem. Because, most of the individuals prefer to migr...
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Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...o numerous reasons. Although, these are basic necessities and also profitable for them to migrate...
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Line 3, column 581, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'appreciate living'.
Suggestion: appreciate living
...they should aware from these issues and appreciate to live in countrysides and so on. Therefore , ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ive in countrysides and so on. Therefore , this proy become overcome. As a result,...
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Line 4, column 35, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , both
...nt. To recapitulate, it seems to me as,both legal authorities and residents play vi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24456521739 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96779768377 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548913043478 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.7566728379 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7272727273 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165930927449 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481235042135 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415440787011 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101555516315 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394850091245 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 277, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...vernment and public plays vital role in this criteria and reasons are discussed in t...
^^^^
Line 2, column 242, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... of houses to accommodate residents. In this criteria, most of the citizens prefer t...
^^^^
Line 2, column 429, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...tees should play essential role. Because,if they increase the property rates or con...
^^^
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ows extreme part to solve this problem. Because, most of the individuals prefer to migr...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...o numerous reasons. Although, these are basic necessities and also profitable for them to migrate...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 581, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'appreciate living'.
Suggestion: appreciate living
...they should aware from these issues and appreciate to live in countrysides and so on. Therefore , ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 636, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ive in countrysides and so on. Therefore , this proy become overcome. As a result,...
^^
Line 4, column 35, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , both
...nt. To recapitulate, it seems to me as,both legal authorities and residents play vi...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24456521739 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96779768377 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548913043478 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.7566728379 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7272727273 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165930927449 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481235042135 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415440787011 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101555516315 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394850091245 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.