There is a large number of young people dropping out from schools and it effects our society in different ways
In your opinion, what are the causes and its consequences to the whole society?
The 21st century has witnessed an unprecedented increase in terms of students dropping out of the academy. This essay will elaborate on the reasons for this phenomenon and provide solutions to tackle of it
This problem has a number of effects on the institute and society. One main cause of this issue is that the course curriculum does not have diversity, according to the framework. The second cause is a number of schools' less hands-on activities and experiences. Furthermore, the academy frequently imparts knowledge based on theory which makes students feel bored and uninterested. The third cause is a conventional way of learning, there is no novelty in learning. Besides, the attitude of young people with a way to learn does not have serious. In the family, parents lack care about the academy and the problem of children.
There are a number of consequences of the increasing dropout rate of young people. To begin with, the first consequence is the influence on education and university, reducing the prestige and quality of the academy. The second consequence is young people are not motivated to learn due to the heavy amount of knowledge and lack of practice. To improve, students need a cognition switch about this issue, the essential of study. Faculty should change course curriculum to provide an incentive for younger, create more experiential activities for students. In addition, students need to be responsible for their learning, the school should also organize extracurricular activities for young people.
In conclusion, faculty could certainly implement a range of measures to enhance the quality of study for young people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, second, so, third, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27169811321 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93919874871 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532075471698 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0780026502 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.1333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157152406456 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541464641831 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463065760541 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803366166345 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455180855885 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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