There is a moral necessity today for the richer countries of the world to help the poorer countries develop in terms of feeding the population, education and healthcare. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the distant past, mother earth had been enormous and fascinating before human human " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">was come to earth. in the beginning, there were plenty of disasters, turbulence ad as well as epidemics. they are kill mother earth day by day. the beauty of nature is damaged by mankind. Pollution of water, soil, air which people take it for granted are conundrums at the moment. More fifteen trees are cut down every year and it leads to other problem is soil erosion. The weather is always varying that people cannot be predictable exactly. notwithstanding those dangers, people seems so indifferent and they are dead out by themselves. because they really slight the environment, the mother earth. For the following years, mankind mankind " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">is put up with the serious and dangerous viruses called corona-virus. it protects the mother earth by eliminating human existence in a negative and rude way.everytime has a number of people are dead by this viruses. it could be called a karma with human for what they they " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">have the environment terrible. But every cloud has a silver lining, corona-viruses helps people to realize what they have done with the environment and give them a chance to redo everything in a better way, know about your life and everything around you you " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">in order to be grateful to creator. The solution for those conundrums is a breeze, just love and care of the environment, animals more. the mother earth always forgive to everything in her planet and mankind is not apart from. we can can " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">reduce, reuse, recycle the litters. Never throwing the rubbish and reducing them. we also take part in environmental protecting organization, that is not a bad decision. In addition, outisde has plenty of various ways that you can discover on the internet, at school or in society. As long as is having an inquisitive spirit and really want to the environment get better, The mother earth can recovered.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: human
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, well, apart from, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47933884298 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.75360299911 2.80592935109 134% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.5616042902 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.45 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.15 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0581752281346 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0170440143591 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258679497813 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0581752281346 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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