There is no need to maintain a close relationship with distant relatives.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In modern era people have been focusing on socialization using various progressive communication technologies and social media. An opinion exists that nowadays warm interaction with extended siblings is a relic of the past and ought to be optional and needless. I completely disagree with the above-mentioned statement due to the reasons mentioned hereinafter.
Firstly, I am convinced that adults who maintain connections with extended brothers and sisters could count on mutual support in turbulent times. Recently individuals may boast on large number of friends in internet, but when something terrible happens only a kin can really help. For example, when popular media personalities fall into controversial scandals, the majority of public start to bully them immediately, and only household members are hurry to comfort them. Hence, encouragement of one another in uncertain phases and staying in touch with all near is extremely vital.
Secondly, even the third cousins are part of the one dynasty, so they are unlikely to deceive or frame. Presently, there are lots of cases in which the best childhood buddies fool each other due to issues with money and other stuff. For example, the famous entrepreneur Mark Zuckerberg has founded Facebook with his roommate, but after several years of intense business they had a big fight and sued each other. Thus, it is better to trust significant things to the fellows within your blood, as they likely to always uphold you.
Taking everything into consideration, you need to keep in touch with distant relatives, as these persons can be trusted and they will not betray you. Otherwise, you will remain alone with your troubles and solving them by oneself is extremely tough.
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- The planet s population is reaching unsustainable levels and people are facing shortage of resources like water food and fuel To what consequences may overpopulation lead In your opinion what measures can be taken to fight overpopulation 21
- Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for and allow their children to do whatever they want Is this a good way to raise children What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, third, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27173913043 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84295181568 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.70652173913 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2611738125 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.923076923 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211794116142 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666663658525 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060823397626 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121099726919 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537746777387 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.