There is a shortage of housing in many countries and this can lead to severe social consequences. Only governments can solve this problem.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that governments should be the ones who tackle the problem related to housing shortages. In my own perspective, I believe that besides governments, other elements in society such as constructive companies, charities or non-pro-fit organizations can give a hand to address this issue.
There are some reasons why the government might be the primitive member to solve the housing issues. The authorities could solve a problem by adjusting the real estate price in order to help people who meet the basic need to afford the house price. Besides that, because the lack of houses could lead to a result that people will face homelessness or poverty so people could provide financial support in the form of rent payments such as temporary housing for those who find them homeless or poor.
Although the government could do several things to solve the issue, other factors of society should also join their hand to address this problem. In terms of constructive companies, they can cooperate with the authorities to erect buildings. This might be both beneficial for society and the companies. Or the charities, these organizations can raise a campaign for people to fund their money to build housing for low financial conditions. For example, in Vietnam we have a program called “Chap canh uoc mo” to give poor people financial support and build a house which can help them to survive throughout the weather condition safely.
For all aforementioned reasons, I firmly hold the view that apart from the government, many remaining bodies could lend a hand to tackle this question.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 636, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hroughout the weather condition safely. For all aforementioned reasons, I firmly...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, so, apart from, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09541984733 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77539710478 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587786259542 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9616832765 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.363636364 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222792160746 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866808107382 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035994796262 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127475220558 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443622620383 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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