These day, people are so dependent on facilities such as washing machines or dishwasher. As a result, they are being so lazy to do things by themselves.
What are effects of these facilities and what problems will this create in the future?
In today's modern technology is comfortable to do our household works such as washing machines or dishwasher. As a consequent, there are concerns about dependency may lead to laziness and various problems in the future. This essay will discuss the effects of these facilities and create potential issues.
Firstly, this type of technology solution of the people's difficult and easy household works such as washing machines or dishwasher. This way become a more important things in housewife's life. The use of such facilities has improved efficiency, ensuring that clothes and dishes are cleaned thoroughly and does not take a lot of time, it is also easy to use.
On the other hand, people become accustomed to using washing machines or dishwasher, they may improve a sense of laziness and dependency on these device. This can contribute to increased energy consumption and environmental degradation besides, result to leading a sedentary lifestyle and reduced physical activity. For instance, if a washing machine or dishwasher breaks down, users who are dependency to wash their clothes effectively.
In conclusion, the available of household facilities such as washing machines or dishwashers offers advantage and efficiency, this can lead to laziness and various problems in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this device' or 'these devices'?
Suggestion: this device; these devices
...e a sense of laziness and dependency on these device. This can contribute to increased energ...
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Line 5, column 385, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...achine or dishwasher breaks down, users who are dependency to wash their clothes effect...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 201.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46268656716 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00940334656 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582089552239 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4247244479 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.8 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344295128836 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131571766433 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728687731169 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215306472003 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526672506891 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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