These days many families move abroad for work. Some people believe that this would be beneficial for their children. Other think that it make their life more complicated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays, mobility among people is gaining ground radically. Presently, large number of families are migrating to overseas for work and accommodation while some people believe that it would lead to complex lifestyle. Here this essay, accounts for both the sides along with my own opinion.
There are plethora points depict this phenomena. First and foremost, migrating abroad is supposed to uplift the standard of the education system of the juveniles. To elaborate. Foreign countries provide qualitative range of practical and theoretical academic skills which can enhance the health, wealth and living of the offsprings. Thus, it will have affirmative effect on the lifestyles of the families too.
What is more. Shifting abroad for work and accommodation purposes can sprout a new culture, language, and traditions in them. However, children become self dependent for earning his own two square meal for better living. Besides it, it uplift their dignity and confidence while handling their own chores. Hence, mobilising overseas is believed to be a positive trend. By contrast, opposite wind is also there.
To commence with, the phenomena leads to stressful lifestyle. To exemplify. Families and juveniles have to handle unnecessary burden of their earning and education which may adversely lay burden on their mind. Last but not least, parents working in abroad has busiest living and had no time for their offsprings. As a result, children lack physical and physiological growth and they remain unavail from the love and intimecy of their family members.
For my notion, both the sides has its own significane. Undeniably, it will be uneven to support any of the side entirely. Moving overseas may be beneficial for prosperous life but it will adversely affect the economical and social growth of native nation.
To recapitulate, people nowadays are becoming more mobile as compared to past. Administration should take proactive steps to provide favourable opportunities within the boundaries to halt the migration for the. Significant growth of the native country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, while, as for, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46439628483 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83262615877 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625386996904 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.372896998 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7391304348 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0434782609 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4347826087 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356867127913 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072702102904 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060259110337 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160549559754 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764579375971 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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