Nowadays, many individuals from less developed nations choose to work in a foreign country and often take their family with them to live a better life. I believe that the advantages of working in a rich country, like earning enormous money, numerous opportunities for professional growth, outweigh its disadvantages. In the following paragraphs, both pros and cons of living in a developed nation are discussed.
Many people prefer to migrate to wealthy countries for better prospects and take their family members with them. They settle abroad because of numerous benefits which they get in these nations, like better education for children, affordable healthcare, and many golden opportunities for professional growth. These perks not only make their life easier, but they also live a luxurious life which they are not able to afford in their own country. In Canada, for example, tens of thousands of professionals migrate every year in search of jobs, and after getting permanent residency, they live a comfortable life.
Children's moral values, on the other hand, get adversely affected as they stay separated from their cultural roots, and live in a foreign atmosphere. Instead of learning their own culture, they inculcate foreign traditions and hardly learn anything about the history of their forefathers. Moreover, they don’t pay attention to the needs of their old parents and left them alone to live an isolated life. The quality of education and career opportunities in these countries, however, far outweigh these concern areas. For example, in countries like the United Kingdom, child education is free of cost, and there are specialized skill enhancement programs for children at a very early age.
To conclude, keeping the number of career growth opportunities in a foreign country in mind, it is justified to work in an affluent nation and provide a better life to our family members. With such a platform, not only individuals grow enormously, but they also raise their standard of living which they cannot afford in their own country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, as for, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70048773921 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519756838906 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 329.0 20.2975951904 1621% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1692.0 106.682146367 1586% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 329.0 20.7667163134 1584% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 76.0 7.06120827912 1076% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283299446559 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.283299446559 0.084324248473 336% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195087382026 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481630860039 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 167.3 13.0946893788 1278% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -262.46 50.2224549098 -523% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 131.6 11.3001002004 1165% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.01 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.36 8.58950901804 272% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 9.78957915832 613% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 133.6 10.1190380762 1320% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 60.0 10.7795591182 557% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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