These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive and negative development?
Recent decades have witnessed an upsurge in the number of women becoming the breadwinners for their family while men stay at home for childcare. However, This pattern could lead to equally positive and negative consequences.
Changes in family roles could be attributed to the disappearance of prejudices relating to gender roles. Equal rights movements in favor of feminism culminate act as a deterrent for ingrained gender preferences. This suggests the social acceptance of women given an autonomy to pursue their careers and climb the promotion ladders while it also has become the social norm that men can stay at home to take care of the family.
There are also both advantages and disadvantages of that trend. On the one hand, These changes in the family pattern mean that women could despise their marriage partner for having no money-earning capabilities. This means that the likelihood of arguments and father’s negligence of family responsibilities is inevitable, pushing their marriage to the verge of divorce. On the other hand, this trend could act as an incentive for the family bonding between the father and the children. In fact, playing sports or home education with the father could make children feel the sense of family sentiments and have a deeper understanding of their father’s personality.
In conclusion, given that this family trend could be due to the social acceptance of gender equalities. Although stay-at-home dads constitute the causal relationship with the enhancement of family relationship, they could be susceptible to the possibilities of being looked down on by their spouse.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, so, while, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39453125 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07550401976 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55859375 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8834137888 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.083333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294578476031 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106578762259 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053597626403 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18794025673 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271321262861 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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