These days, Scientist can tell whether a child will become criminal or not by examining the child at the age of three.Do you agree that crime is a product of human nature? Do you think that we can stop children from becoming criminals?
Nowadays, crime rates are increasing tremendously.There are different factors influencing the steady growth of criminals.However, this is an attempt to shed lights on offence is a product of human nature and the measures to prevent the children from becoming culprit in details.
Obviously, of the many factors of crime , the most important one is nothing but the human nature.Offence is a product of bad human nature.Children did crime if they lack proper parenting & upbringing.Parents should their rude behavior towards their children.Thus the children follow the same behavior and showed to other people.For instance, a child raised in a theft family , so the child start doing stealing from his childhood.Secondly, many factors influence a child to do crimes such as improper use of internet& other mass media, peer pressure and so on.In this modern era , there is an advancement of technology.Thus the mis-usage of mass media will develop bad behaviour in the children.To illustrate , a child watched offence related video regularly, then the child has a tendency to imitate it.Moreover, they don't think about the consequences.In addition to this, teenagers may fell into bad gangs due to making friends in social media like Facebook,WhatsApp etc.
However, it is high time to analyze the solution to preventing student from becoming criminals with the deepest concern.First & foremost, is proper parenting or guidance. Parents should behave friendly as well as with loving attitudes towards their children.Then the child developed trust in their parents.Therefore, they tried to obey moral values. Parents should educate regarding good friendship. Secondly, placing the television& computer in the open space.So the parents can easily monitor their children & if it's needed they can block unwanted sites.
To conclude, offence is a product of human bad nature.Certainly, I'm hopeful that proper parenting & controlling the usage of the internet can stop children from becoming culprits .
- These days Scientist can tell whether a child will become criminal or not by examining the child at the age of three Do you agree that crime is a product of human nature Do you think that we can stop children from becoming criminals 84
- The children who grow up in a family short of money are more capable of dealing with problems in adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents.What extent do you agree or disagree? 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62251655629 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4514356221 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619205298013 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 288.199264965 49.4020404114 583% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 242.571428571 106.682146367 227% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.1428571429 20.7667163134 208% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.1428571429 7.06120827912 299% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248539703615 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102717506177 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604798321353 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15017776478 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277421224178 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.6 13.0946893788 203% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.37 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.2 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.84 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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